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Title: Ravenwood Hero's Tales.
Post by: Raven on June 30, 2010, 09:04:42 am

The Darkest Corners
The Wavering Light
The Shouts and Screams
That Broke the Night.

The Warrior Answers
With No Reason
A Noble Defender
With No Treason

And Aevum Held
Against Those Frights
The Warrior Gave Hope
To Those Without Sight

He Led Them On
Through the Land
Hoping to Forge
A Strong New Band

A Group of Hero's
Comprised of Many
To Stop the Uprising
That was Plenty

And With Weapons Raised
They Charge In
Remembering The Night
And the Fear Again

So That Justice Prevails
They Risk Their Lives
Praying they Keep
These New Ties.

And as They Walk
Away From the Town
They Will Know
the Sun Will Crown.




I'm not actually sure what inspired this. I was thinking of morning, friends, and looking at my background (which is a sword named Aevum. Aevum is Latin for Life, and the sword is supposed to represent the choice you have between cutting life away or defending it.) and then I just pulled up notepad and started writing.

I'm going to bed :P Goodnight! (Criticism's welcomed!)

Title: Re: Ravenwood Hero's Tales.
Post by: Connor Altinus Mcleod on September 01, 2010, 07:57:50 pm

Most impressive indeed.

Title: Re: Ravenwood Hero's Tales.
Post by: Shadoswalker on October 13, 2010, 02:24:28 am

Very cool

Title: Re: Ravenwood Hero's Tales.
Post by: Caladryell on October 15, 2010, 07:13:33 pm

Well Written!